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  1. #1
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    14.12.80
    11:30
    Leningrad.
    Come on hunny,you get this sucker out!
    She pushed and pushed and she brought a baby boy to life.
    They named him Alex.
    They were happy,and they drank and got drunk.
    12:00
    Boris,the father went out from the hospital to rest.
    12:30
    Sonya kept drinking,and she was to drunk.
    And then she had feelings,and the doctors discovered that there is a new baby coming to earth.
    She pushed and pushed and she named him Gregory.
    Because she was drunk she didn't remember about it and she forgot about him.
    And he stayed in the hospital for adoption.
    28.1.80
    A young married couple looked at him,and though he
    was perfect.
    So they took him,adopted Gregory.
    16.6.86
    First grade,first day at school!
    "I hope they will give us home work" Greg Said.
    4.2.89
    My First Girl friend,I was in the 3rd class,and luckily that day was also my first kiss.
    6.9.95
    My cousins from Israel came to visit us.
    Theyr son Andrey wich was 18 years old showed me hes gun,as a secret of course.
    He asked my if I wanted to shot on the wall,my answer was negative.
    I was thinking"Why should I do that,the cops will blame me for doing something I didn't wanted,I don't need that!"
    30.8.01
    The red army has requited me,I was theyr best marine,and also I got an honor medal.
    30.9.05
    22:00
    My cousin andrey Called me,he wanted me to come to America now!
    He sayed the life in there are good,glory,women,money and more!
    23:00
    A ship took me to America.
    3.1.05
    Here I am,Los santos,I met my cousin Andrey.
    He showed me my home,Bugs every where.
    I discovered he lied,he was a realy poor guy and he got on debs.
    And I needed to do the black job.
    I Killed a guy named Kraig,a nigger.
    14.1.06
    He told me I was working secretly for the Soviet bratava,a Russian mafia in los santos.
    He introduced me to the boss,Alexander.
    That day My Group Had to Murder This Japanese guy,First we sniffed around the house and we found out it was an other mafia,The Yakuza.
    And then he and 3 of hes guards showed up behind us,and killed my group,I was left alone.
    I killed the two guards and shot that man on hes leg.
    I ran out and came back to base.
    16.1.06
    I got a letter from my parents.
    They wanted me to know that I was adapted by them.
    The gave me the phone number of my real parents.
    I called them.
    They sayed that my fathers name was Boris,and my moms name was Sonya.
    I Called them.
    I am speaking to Sonya?
    "Yes,who is it"?
    I Think im your son.
    I was born at 15.12 1980.
    She sayed her other son was born that year that day.
    And she sayed that he leaves in America,hes name was alex.
    At the end of the Call I herd gunshots.
    And my mom,Sonya screamd,You are Gregory,Krasnianski!
    She hung up.
    17.1.06
    I looked on the paper.
    "a House in Leningrad was bombed by Terrorists.
    30 people died,and here are the names.
    I saw the names,Sonya Krasnianski.I Cryed.
    Later on they sayed that a person named Boris krasnianski is still alive,and he is still waiting for a phone call.
    I Called him,and we talked.
    He sayed he is in a hospital in San Fierro.
    I Drove there,and it was to late.
    Some one Killed him allredy.
    4.2.06
    DRIVE FASTER I heard.
    I AM DRIVING LIKE A CAR IN FORMOOLA 1 WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT? I screamd.
    The cops got us.
    They Arested Me,and they killed my friends.
    They took me to investigation.
    Alon:What is your name sir?
    Greg:Gregory Aronov sir.
    Stupidly I answerd my name,the right name.
    We know all about your mafia,he said.
    We know You got here in an illegal way.
    They said they wanted to hear all I know about the mafia.
    I Said,That I Will tell,if il get rewarded.
    They wanted to give me money,I answered negatively.
    I Offerd them that if I will be a police man in LSPD.
    3.10.06
    A big operation on the Soviet bratava,they said.
    I Were In the house when something like 50 cops were around the house.
    We started shoting,I killed 10 cops to stay on a low profile,but in the end they arrested every one,every one but me and my boss.
    We were alone with a lot of guns in the room.
    There were a hidden entrance in the room,wich I told Alon about it.
    An Oficer Came out of that entrance and The boss almost killed him.
    I Shot at the boss,Alexander.
    I Said that he made my life horribal,and im starting a new life.
    The cop he almost died, took him to the station.
    The doctors treated him good.
    I asked what was hes name,he answerd"My Name is Alex,Alex Krasnianski".
    I Started to cry.
    I Talked to him,about Boris my father,and what I found out.
    4.10.06
    I Got my uniform,and I celebrated it with my brother,alex.
    We drank alot.
    9.5.07
    This guy almost killed me!
    He Said that I will be his cop,means, I will work for him,but suddenly I saw his face in my memory.
    How could I forget?
    I shot at him on the leg.
    And he said if I want to live,I will work for him.
    I didn't know he was still in the yakuza,I hoped he weren’t.
    12.12.08
    Its Almost our birthday brother,I said.
    *יוערך בהמשך*


    שם:Greg
    שם משפחה:Krasnianski
    מספר זהות:"X"
    ארץ לידה:בריה"מ לשעבר
    עיר לידה:לנינגראד
    תאריך לידה:15.12.80
    צבע עיניים:ירוק
    צבע שער:שחור
    משקל:86 ק"ג
    גובה:1.86

    נערך לאחרונה על ידי DrumDeViL; 11.12.2008 בשעה 18:47. סיבה: תיקון שגיאות וכו'.דודי 3> D:
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    אחד הסיפורים אחי
    יש לך כשרון
    1. - GOW3
    2. - Uncharted 2
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  3. #3
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    ליד חדרה D:
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    יפפה ..
    אהבתי ..
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  4. #4
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    אהבתי את הסיפור כל הכבוד
    [Syd]Gato[D]
    שחקן כבוד
    The legend

    The drifter
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  5. #5
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    וואו איזה סיפור !
    כל הכבוד
    מושקע ברמות
    לשעבר בפורום: yoni745
    DJ Yoni L
    Vgames RP DJ
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  6. #6
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    אחלה סיפור!
    (האמ האמ אני זה אלכס האמ האמ חחחחח)
    Admin lvl 9 in Vgames 2 RolePlay


    Name:Mike_Rowden


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  7. #7
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    אחלה סיפור דמות!
    (רגע,האנדריי בסיפור שלך זה אני?Andrey_Kirmasov?)
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    כן בר בר,:X.
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  9. #9
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    אז יש לך בעיה,יש סיכוישאני אזהה אותך בארפי,אני חוזר להיות אנדריי קירמסוב,בינתיים הדמות שלי ראתה שאין כל זכר לסובייט,אז היא חושבת שהמשטרה הרסו את הסובייט או משהו והיא כועסת,היא רוצה להחזיר את הסוביט
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  10. #10
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    סיפור יפה.
    אתה אח של מרטין ic?
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  11. #11
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    סיפור מצויין
    אלללה יאקוזה !!
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  12. #12
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    תודה רבה לכולכם =].

    אגב זה הסיפור הראשון שלי.
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  13. #13
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    אחלה סיפור אחי,כתבת באנגלית כמעט בלי שגיאות ויש כאן ילדים שיש להם שגיאות בעברית.

    בקיצור,כל הכבוד.
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  14. #14
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    אנגלית לא משהו..
    בכללי אבל סיפור נחמד.
    Bar Russo
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